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A perfect life.

Post  Admin on Sun May 30, 2010 11:16 am

A perfect home, a happy child.
Cuddling up to daddy, mummy cooking dinner.
Watching a sad movie together.
Tears fill her eyes, she hugs daddy closer.
The bowl of popcorn, Juice standing close.
Reality breaks.
A broken home, a broken child.
Daddy is gone, no food for days.
The movie is life, watching a film of a happy home.
She cries all alone, no daddy to care.
Popcorn turns to pills, juice to drink.
Reality breaks her.
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Re: A perfect life.

Post  Wonderer on Mon May 31, 2010 3:07 pm

Aww Sad I like it but its depressing D:

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Post  Crystal:) on Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:41 am

I've only just noticed this :/
it's really good xxxx and sad. You should put it in poems Smile

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