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Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 7:18 am

Here it is again; that same, sad song.
With every note a musical prayer,
With every chord I shed a tear.
As the tear drops it splashes into the puddle
of times now past.
The same salty drop
Falling endlessly.
With a drop, it explodes.
Moistening the pine
Of your new home.
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Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 7:40 am

I don't mind this one, I dont hate it as much as the others :/
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Post  Wonderer on Mon May 31, 2010 2:57 pm

There's nothing wrong with it - it's good Smile

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Post  Crystal:) on Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:51 am

Soo sweet ^-^
love it Smile

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Post  Admin on Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:35 pm

thanks Razz you're too kind Embarassed
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Post  Crystal:) on Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:51 pm

Just truth Smile

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