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Salvation

Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 7:20 am

Only in Darkness will you find Salvation
No source of light will save your Soul
Only the shadows will offer Forgiveness
Every bad deed will now take its toll.

Open the vein and watch your sorrows drown the air around you.
Allow the dark to drown it too.
Sorry is just a word, Pathetic and Meaningless.
Only now can I apologise to you.

I take your revenge upon myself
Because I know you never would.
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Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 7:42 am

I have a very vague memory of someone chanting the first 2 lines at me, over and over again. But, like with most of my memories, I cant remember much else.
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Post  Wonderer on Mon May 31, 2010 2:56 pm

I like the rhyme and rhythm Smile

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Post  Crystal:) on Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:55 am

Awwws seems like an emotional poem Smile makes me wanna cry :') it's really amazingly written

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Post  Admin on Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:38 pm

i can feel my head expanding with hot air Embarassed its a bit odd, I was gonna make the first paragraph a refrain but I didnt like it so I changed it :/
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