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Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 7:21 am

Precious as tinfoil,
Unbreakable as glass,
Stable as water,
Pretty as a boar,
Loyal as a dog.
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Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 7:43 am

Again, I dont really like this one either :/ It's not really a poem but thoughts written down.
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Post  Crystal:) on Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:47 am

I like this one Smile
it's short and I think that increases the impact Smile
it sounds poetic to me Smile
I love the way the similies are used Smile
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Post  Admin on Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:33 pm

thank yous Smile I have a problem with it but I havent realised yet, what it is .. :/
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