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Cliff fall

Post  Admin on Mon May 31, 2010 4:52 pm

The rock tumbles down.
The ground begins to quake.
Bounces on the way.
Down the cliff she goes,
Rolling all the way.
Not too steep.
2 rocks fell,
1 got back up again.
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Re: Cliff fall

Post  Crystal:) on Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:20 am

Why do the last who lines mean? :')

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Re: Cliff fall

Post  Admin on Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:59 pm

the rocks are people, well, person. technically people. Crying or Very sad
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