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Post  Admin Mon May 31, 2010 6:40 pm

Hand reaches out, reassuring and gentle
Ready to caress soft, loving skin.
Child stares blankly, timid and innocent
The child is afraid, White as paper.
The hand falls hard against the skin, bruising and painful
The child feels pain, tries not to cry.
A smaller whimper escapes it.
Hand makes a fist, horrible and cruel
It falls heavier than the hand, solid as a rock.
Repeated blows.
The pain intolerable..
not physical pain, the inner pain.
The pain the fist creates on the mind.
It hurts.
It cries.
It cowers.
It grows.
It stands.
It fights.
It falls.
It hurts.
It cries. (paper finds scissors. scissors finds vein)
It hurts.
She dies.

Rock, Paper, Scissors.
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Post  Crystal:) Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:34 am

Awwwwwwws, it amazing! But really sad
where did ya get the rock paper scissors idea from? Smile

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Post  Admin Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:45 am

the idea of the clenched fist made me think of a rock and the child was paper Razz it just sorta grew from that. its like a childhood game thing so it links up with the child and makes it more innocent
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Post  Crystal:) Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:22 am

Awwws it's really amazing Smile

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Post  Admin Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:14 pm

awws thanks Embarassed
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