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Ode to a Lost Soul

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Post  Admin Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:48 pm

Water falls into salty seas
So deep, a bottomless pit in the darkness
The Broken wreckage calls out for help,
While a lonely survivor, a soul lost in the dark
Struggles to keep grasp of life.
The rain begins and the survivor fades
Life falters, too hard to continue breathing
In the mist, a blurred light.
Dries up all the water
Clears away the tears.
The lonely survivor has reason to go on,
The wreckage can be fixed.
The Soul is lost no more.
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Post  Crystal:) Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:24 pm

Awwws this is relly goood Smile

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