Salvation
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Salvation
Only in Darkness will you find Salvation
No source of light will save your Soul
Only the shadows will offer Forgiveness
Every bad deed will now take its toll.
Open the vein and watch your sorrows drown the air around you.
Allow the dark to drown it too.
Sorry is just a word, Pathetic and Meaningless.
Only now can I apologise to you.
I take your revenge upon myself
Because I know you never would.
No source of light will save your Soul
Only the shadows will offer Forgiveness
Every bad deed will now take its toll.
Open the vein and watch your sorrows drown the air around you.
Allow the dark to drown it too.
Sorry is just a word, Pathetic and Meaningless.
Only now can I apologise to you.
I take your revenge upon myself
Because I know you never would.
Re: Salvation
I have a very vague memory of someone chanting the first 2 lines at me, over and over again. But, like with most of my memories, I cant remember much else.
Re: Salvation
I like the rhyme and rhythm
Wonderer- Posts : 27
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Join date : 2010-05-31
Type of Creator? : Movie creator ^_^, writter and sometimes I write poems/lyrics (only when I am really down though)
Re: Salvation
Awwws seems like an emotional poem makes me wanna cry :') it's really amazingly written
Crystal:)- Posts : 121
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Type of Creator? : Poet :)
Re: Salvation
i can feel my head expanding with hot air its a bit odd, I was gonna make the first paragraph a refrain but I didnt like it so I changed it :/
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